Tuesday, October 29, 2013

Happy Halloween & Birthday!

What am I reading now? The Chaos of Stars (Kiersten White)
Annnd . . . what do I think so far?  Isadora is 17 and thinks her family is messed up--don't all teens think that at one time or another? But Isadora is right. Her aunt seduced her dad, her mom married (in name only) her brother. Her dad was murdered and her mother brought him back to life.
     Oh, they're Egyptian gods. That should explain it.
     Isadora isn't a god and has to deal with not being immortal and eventually losing her life and family while they all dysfunctionally continue their chaotic lives throughout eternity.
     Win this book (it's really a $15 Amazon US gift card)! Leave a comment about birthdays or Halloween, and your email address so I can let you know if you've won.

On October 30th in 2010 was my first blog post! Happy third birthday to my journey to learn about writing. I've learned so much and I hope I've share a little to help someone else in their journey too.

And a Happy Halloween to all of you. This is one of my favorite holidays of the year--when all things fiction are celebrated! Here's a preview of our family's costumes this year...

Tuesday, October 22, 2013

Ripple Effect Novella Series--Can't Wait

The Ripple Effect Romance Novella Series 
Enjoy this exciting new series of clean novellas by six critically-acclaimed authors.

"Like a pebble tossed into calm water, a simple act can ripple outward and have a far-reaching effect on those we meet, perhaps setting a life on a different course—one filled with excitement, adventure, and sometimes even love."

Book 1: Home Matters by Julie N. Ford
Book 2: Silver Linings by Kaylee Baldwin
Book 3: Righting A Wrong by Rachael Anderson
Book 4: Lost and Found by Karey White
Book 5: Second Chances 101 by Donna K. Weaver
Book 6: Immersed in Love by Jennifer Griffith

Home Matters by Julie N. Ford

According to her mother, Olivia Pembroke was born to be a star. But how is she supposed to be famous when she can't even get a decent acting gig? Her lucky break comes when she lands an audition for a wildly popular home improvement show. Even though she has no design training and has never even held a power tool, she refuses to let that stop her. She's confident that her destiny is finally within reach.

When her affections are torn between her heartthrob co-host and the irritating, yet somehow endearing lead contractor, does she continue to reach for the stars? Or does she design a new happily ever after? One that leads not to the fading lights of fame and fortune, but to a love that will burn forever.

Silver Linings by Kaylee Baldwin

Drew Westfall wants nothing more than to forget what he had to do in the name of "smart" business. Cutting off all ties with his parents—including handing over the entire contents of his trust fund to a charity—he takes off for Bridger, Colorado where his best friend has an extra room for him. It doesn't take long for him to realize that his business degree won’t do him much good in a town as small as Bridger, but he's broke and has nowhere else to go.

Eden Torresi has every reason to wallow. Not only did she lose her mother, but she had to drop out of nursing school and is in a relationship with a guy unwilling to commit. But Eden isn't the wallowing type. Instead, she chooses to spend most of her time taking care of the seniors at Silver Linings Nursing home. When she learns that her boyfriend's new roommate is down on his luck, her caring nature makes her want to reach out to him and offer what help she can. But the more time they spend together, the more complicated things get, especially when the seniors of Silver Linings decide to play matchmaker.

Righting a Wrong by Rachael Anderson

Seven years ago, Cambri Blaine fled her small hometown of Bridger, Colorado after her senior year ended in a fiasco. Only Jace Sutton knew the real reason why—that she was a spineless coward. Now, seven years later, her father's been in an accident and needs help, and Cambr has no choice but to return home. So with trepidation, she takes a leave of absence from the landscape architecture firm where she works and boards a plane, hoping against hope that Jace is no longer around and that the past can stay where it belongs—in the past.

If only life worked that way.

Jace never expected to see Cambri again. After she’d led him on, bruised his heart, and left town without a backward glance, he was forced to pick up the pieces and try not to hate her for it. Eventually, he put it behind him and moved on, creating a life for himself in his beloved hometown. But now that Cambri is back and looking more beautiful and sophisticated than ever, some of those old feelings resurface, and Jake instinctively knows, for the sake of his heart, that he needs to avoid her at all costs.

If only it were that easy.

Lost and Found by Karey White

Lydia was supposed to have an adventurous and exciting summer. Instead she's done nothing more than read and eat takeout. Now it's time to go home, and what does she have to show for it? A big fat nothing. Unless, of course, her trip to the airport somehow turns into something more than just a flight home.

Blake feels like he's been sent on a wild goose chase. While work is piling up back in Denver, he's on the other side of the country, hunting for some mysterious box that his grandfather left him. Well, no more. Nothing inside that box could possibly be more important than the opportunity to make it as the youngest partner at his firm. So he's going home, and that's that. But that's before he discovers his flight has been cancelled.

When these two strangers meet at the airport, they make a split-second decision to search for the box together. Maybe with both of them on the hunt, Lydia can have her adventure and Blake can find the box. And maybe, if they’re lucky, they’ll even find some romance.

Second Chances 101 by Donna K. Weaver

Thirty seven year old Francie Davis, a recent widow and empty nester, gets to attend college at last. She’s sure her luck has changed when she also lands a job on campus that will pay her tuition, as administrative assistant to a history professor. When her handsome new boss yells at her on the first day of work, Francie worries she will never be good enough.

For Professor Alex Diederik, life is going downhill fast. Not only is his bitter ex-wife trying to poison their only daughter against him, but now his one place of solace—his work environment—is being complicated by his attractive new administrative assistant. She drives home his feelings of failure as a husband and father, and Alex wonders if hiring her was the right thing to do.

Francie will have to put aside her hurt and insecurities or risk her dreams, while Alex must look outside himself if he’s to mend the breach with his daughter. And, perhaps, find someone who can help heal his pain.

Immersed in Love by Jennifer Griffith

Lisette Pannebaker speaks five languages and has a brilliant business plan—personal language immersion. Clients can hire her to shadow them and speak all day in any language they need to learn for business or travel—whatever.

But there’s a major hitch: she’s far too pretty. Clients with less than honorable intentions sign up just have Lisette at their side. Solution? A make-under. Way under.It works like a charm. None of her male clients show her the least bit of interest.

Until… Erik.

Erik Gunnarsson is charming, kind, and smart—everything she’s ever looked for. Even though he seems to have a secret and she swore she'd never date a client, Lisette is tempted to shed her disguise—even if it means jeopardizing her career.

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Tuesday, October 15, 2013

Getting to Know Myself as a Writer

What am I reading now?  The Reluctant Bachelorette (Rachael Anderson)

Annnd . . . what do I think so far? 
Taycee a small town girl. (Me too!)
She grew up in a Colorado community dependent on farming. (Me too!)
She loves the small town life. (Agree to disagree)

It's been 10 years since she's seen Luke. He was her older brother's best friend, and she thought hers too. But when he moved away, and never looked back, or called or wrote it shattered her heart. It isn't bad enough that he's here, but they are both tangled into a scheme the town has to earn money for a farmers' co-op, by staging a Reality Internet Series of The Bachelorette, staring Taycee.

Getting to Know Myself as a Writer
I'm learning a lot about my own writing style. Here are a few of my recent ah-ha's:
I have to consciously write sentences with varying lengths and complexity.
I have to deliberately add in reactions, sequels and emotion. I have a tendency to skip to the next bit of action.
I have to put a novel aside for a while to forget about how it was written to look at it with fresh perspective for revision.
I way over use the word "that"; like 827 times in one book, 731 times in another and 325 times in the latest finished book. Each time I could wipe out about 2/3 of them during editing.

Monday, October 7, 2013

Private Editor

What am I reading now?  Just Ella (Annette K. Larsen)
Annnd . . . what do I think so far?  Just Ella is a clean YA romance novel that I recommend as a great book to shelve in your home or your classroom library. 

The Princess is a delightful character, who I could love and admire from the first scene of the book. I like that although she has a difficult decisions and some high penalties for breaking the rules of her station, she continues to struggle to follow her heart in her friendship and love with Gavin, a gardner. Here's a snippet:

"I watched in helpless horror as two guards hauled Gavin to his feet and dragged him from the room. My voice was frozen, unable to protest as another guard took hold of my arm, leading me upstairs. From the confines of my room, I stared into the darkness beyond my window, hoping to catch one more glimpse of Gavin. He was gone, and I wondered if he would have been better off if he had never met me."

Working with an Editor

Deanna and I have started working with Kat Brendel, a private editor and love the experience of working with her, as well as the feedback we are receiving on our story. If you are looking for this next step in your quest for publication, check out her website:

She's just opened to accepting new clients and has a great party on her site with some fun prizes!

1. Partial Edit: I will be giving away a partial edit of your first 7,500 words. This is the usual amount agents/publishers ask for so this edit will ensure the pages they first see hook them. If you are planning to self-publish, ensuring your first pages entice readers to buy the book is essential! For more detail as to what a partial edit entails, see the description on my Services page.

2. Sub/Pub package: I will be giving away a submission or a publication package, depending on if you plan to traditionally or self-publish. For a more detailed description of what this package entails, see my Services page.

3. 25% off coupon: The name says it all! Valid for one year from the end of the contest, you will receive 25% off the service of your choosing.

Tuesday, October 1, 2013

The Accidental Marriage & Reading Goal


Nina Rushforth was born with a silver spoon caught in her throat. She and her father have mapped out a future that includes a brilliant legal career, a marriage to an equally stellar attorney or Wall Street whiz kid, and eventually the production of three perfect children. A semester at St. Andrew's University in Scotland, was part of the plan, but falling in love with a handsome missionary was not.

Six months later, after Elliot returns from his mission and after a tumultuous courtship, Nina finds herself teaching at a junior high school, learning to keep house in a minuscule apartment, and living with a man who doesn't know any more about being married than she does. Intimacy, cooking, laundry, lesson plans, and a tug-of-war with a possessive mother-in-law prove to be more overwhelming than Nina can successfully manage. The newlyweds awaken to realize the head on the adjacent pillow belongs to a stranger.

This novel captures the heartbreak of young love caught in the turbulent social crosscurrents of the 70's, at a time when brave women struggled to find dignity and equality in the workplace, as well as peace at home.

Publication Date: December 10, 2013
ISBN: 9781462113743
Publisher: Cedar Fort Publishing

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“A thoughtful, heartbreaking, and often laugh-out-loud romp… Annette Haws explores the interesting question: What keeps a marriage together?”
--Terrell Dougan, a columnist for the Huffington Post and the author of That Went Well: Adventures in Caring for my Sister

“Haws delivers a story that makes you want to rush to the end to find out what happens and prose that makes you want to slow down and savor it.”
--Karey White, author of For What It’s Worth, Gifted, and My Own Mr. Darcy

“If you want a story with plot, character and real, deep meaning that will leave you thinking long after you’re done, this is the book for you.”
--Shannon Guymon, author of Do Over

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